Like a solitary droplet of blood,
a barn sewn onto white snow.
Envision a needle poised sky-high,
an eye the world could fit into,
an unimaginably large hand, god-like.
Not too far from the barn,
a patched clapboard church,
churchgoers speckle the hillside
coming down, as if to a ringing bell,
for a morning of winter worship.
The sun frays outward, rays dangling
like strings, melting things. Imagine the maker
breaking thread with teeth, like an ordinary artist,
while pulling it together—stories, lives,
the fabric of it all stitch by delicate stitch.
And out from the church in the vale,
a small town with a school, a hospital,
and a museum, and then other towns,
and cities, countries, continents, and bodies
of water. All the busy people!
And if something were to get a grip
and pull and rip, tearing at the pieces,
unraveling the stories, the lives,
finding the threadbare, the weak spots,
could the holes wrought ever truly be mended?
Tuesday, February 2, 2010
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This isn't complete, but I'm not sure what I want to do with it. So, onward to 100!
ReplyDeleteLove the first stanza especially. A barn sewn onto white snow. Wow.
ReplyDeleteWow! There's so much I love about this poem. I especially love its effort--and the lines "an eye the world could fit into," and "the fabric of it all stitch by delicate stitch." This is a big poem, maybe even one of a small series?
ReplyDeleteRock on Southern Gothic! or Baptist or Tennessee or Caroine D!! I especially love the 3rd and 4th stanzas.
ReplyDeleteVery nice Caroline. I agree with Robyn that maybe there's more to this? When I read this it reminded me of the illustrations in the book Red Light Green Light by Golden McDonald.
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Beautiful imagery...and well-crafted. Maybe a series...play around.
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