Monday, January 4, 2010

Poem #4: After the Fight

She tallies hawks, like omens, perched on treetops.

He drives, eyes on the road’s sudden turns.

Their free hands span the distance between them

and lace together, mountain-like—all knuckles and bone.

Somewhere, a fire smolders as hikers descend

from a campsite. A train dinosaurs through a forgotten town

with mines beneath--arterial and empty. The signs are obvious

as the setting sun and warn the travelers of dangers:

falling rock, sharp curves, steep inclines, until fear

straps them back to each other, with miles yet to go,

until they are only two headlights piercing the darkness.

3 comments:

  1. I don't think #4 is fully cooked, but oh well, so suffers the poetic process, as it was back to my day job today.

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  2. Really, you don't think it's cooked? I so love the image of hand-holding - something so simple and beautiful. I will be thinking about it for days.

    Love the ending.

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  3. This is great! So many aspects, like the way you turn "dinosaurs" into a verb.

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